Wednesday 5 February 2014

Snow is falling by Emily (Squirrel Class)

Snow snow is falling like cotton wool dangling from the trees ,
snow falls like breadcrumbs, the lamp posts are covered with vanilla ice cream
the snow is as thick as Father Christmases beard.
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3 comments:

  1. Mrs Francis5 February 2014 at 19:36

    Well done Emily - what a lovely poem. You have used some really good similes.

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  2. Mrs Murkin6 February 2014 at 09:51

    I love your simile about the vanilla ice cream but it made me feel hungry! I think snow makes everything look like a white iced wedding cake.

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  3. Mrs O'Connor9 February 2014 at 13:54

    I love snow when it covers everything like a snuggly white blanket keeping sleeping children toasty and warm.

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