Tuesday 4 February 2014

My Winter Garden by Jacob (Fox Class)

The leaves fall like tissue paper drifting through the air 
Bullrushes sway like a dolphin's tail swishing in the sea
Rain hammers on the window like my brother beating on the front door
When the snow scatters on the bushes they look like a large bowling ball
I slip on the snow as if I'm iceskating
The trees are as soft as white fur
The grass tugs at the dark sky as if it's saying good night.

2 comments:

  1. Well done Jacob a fantastic poem

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  2. Eleanor said you had used lots of similes! Well done!

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