Sunday 2 February 2014

Snow by Isabel (Squirrel Class)

Snow falling like sparkling sugar grains
Laying on the ground like a thick white blanket
People leaving footprints like deep moon craters
Children throwing snowballs like round tennis balls
Dogs playing and bouncing in the snow like excited skippy lambs.

2 comments:

  1. Your simile about the moon craters is very imaginative, Isabel, and very appropriate as we have been learning about the moon. Well done for writing such an effective poem. I can really see the snow in my mind when you describe it so well.

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  2. My dog Seamus used to love jumping and rolling in the snow!

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